Should I Or Shouldn't I Change The Title

Discussion in 'Indie Writing, Publishing & Marketing Discussion' started by Jesterhawk, Aug 28, 2012.

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Which is better?

  1. Quest for the Golden Book : The Land of Ather

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  2. Quest for the Golden Book : The Land

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  3. I don't like either

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  1. Jesterhawk

    Jesterhawk New Member

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    Hello,

    Ok, so I am getting ready to release the second part of my epic story. The first part I released electronically back in January. Now that I am getting ready to release part two and have titled part two, I am thinking I should have had the first title shorter. Here is the plan:

    Day 1 : The Land (presently The Land of Ather)
    Day 2 : The Healer
    Day 3 : The Servants
    Day 4 :
     
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  2. jedi79

    jedi79 Active Member

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    I don’t think you can go wrong with ether title. I like The Land of Ather a little bit better. I don’t think it is to long, and nicely adds to the title. Especially being the first one.
     
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  3. Indie Authors

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    I agree. I like, "Quest for the Golden Book : The Land of Ather." :)
     
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  4. Samantha Fury

    Samantha Fury Active Member

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    I agree I like the first one. I think you should really work on book four.. LOL!!

    Sorry I couldn't resist.
     
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  5. Jesterhawk

    Jesterhawk New Member

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    The problem is I don't have a clear item that is involved in book 4. A lot occurs but nothing so clear like the other books. So, there was no one title to work with. But when I work on that section of the story I will find something to call it :)

    JH
     
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  6. Samantha Fury

    Samantha Fury Active Member

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    I have named a few books before I wrote them, but not many. :)
     
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  7. Y I Lee

    Y I Lee New Member

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    I like The Land of Ather, best.
     
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